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september brought us budded fingers and willow limbs for arms. it brought pools of pink flowers that held your secrets during the day, when you didn't use them. at night you bathe in moonlight, starlight, and flowers. Don't let others near, lest your silver arrow be perched on your bow like the death of a star. be gentle; the plants glow in vulnerability, and your feet are arrows to their hearts.
october brings us misspellings in the form of bare twigs and patches of grass in the pathway. it might bring tapping fingers and ripped paper, but only the bees who bath in flowers know secrets like those.
october brings us misspellings in the form of bare twigs and patches of grass in the pathway. it might bring tapping fingers and ripped paper, but only the bees who bath in flowers know secrets like those.
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Life and Other Choices
When you talk to people on the train they all seem to tell you they're going home. Tonight on the number fifty-nine train to New Orleans I am not one of those people. I am leaving home. And I swear that someday I will never leave home without her again, but until that day I will spend my nights on the train explaining to people exactly why I can't sleep. And it's because I'm just that tired of leaving.
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help, i'm alive
i'm somewhere
minus a half decade
and half a reality away,
feet tapping to the steady
broken beat
of the half dead speakers
booming the first half
of the song they'll play
at my funeral
next week
half a bottle of vodka later
and a handful of half slurred sentences
and i'm half of the way through the obscure pills
in my medicine cabinet
all of me is hoping that it really works this time.
i haven't seen heaven
in half a lifetime
but i'm pulling prayers
from paltry lips
for a bit of peace
as my head hits the floor
and the last of the vodka
pools onto the carpet.
the whole morning
greets me with hideous glare,
gloating at my
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felicity
who thought that one could love
so fiery… awfully intense
like splinters of wood crackling in the
stillness of the night
among ashen skies and flaming embers
quenched only by the heaviest storms
with fingertips entwined within red threads
and ribcages coalesced within
overgrown dandelion fields;
I beg of you, darling
enshrine my heart between your hands
and nestle its beating
in mid-April showers with clouds
veiling the sky and
the taste of evanesced silver between
my teeth
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I felt like writing, but something small, so I wrote a steam-of-consciousness piece.
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All comments and critiques are welcome.
Is the imagery too flowery or cliche?
What mood do you sense when reading this?
On what aspect of my writing do you suggest I work?
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