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Fold Secrets in Flowers

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september brought us budded fingers and willow limbs for arms. it brought pools of pink flowers that held your secrets during the day, when you didn't use them. at night you bathe in moonlight, starlight, and flowers. Don't let others near, lest your silver arrow be perched on your bow like the death of a star. be gentle; the plants glow in vulnerability, and your feet are arrows to their hearts.
october brings us misspellings in the form of bare twigs and patches of grass in the pathway. it might bring tapping fingers and ripped paper, but only the bees who bath in flowers know secrets like those.
I felt like writing, but something small, so I wrote a steam-of-consciousness piece.

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willow limbs arms, great line