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I'm sorry that I love you,
that I just won't go away when you need someone,
that my heart beats fast when you're around,
that when I close my eyes I see your smile.

I'm sorry that I care,
that I consistently ask how your day was,
that I hold our memories dear,
that I'll always look out for you.

I'm sorry that I smile whenever your near.
that I see you first out of anyone in the crowd.
that I always seem to be by your side,
that we just have too many good times together.

I'm sorry that I worry with you,
that I frown when you aren't happy,
that I tear up when you frown,
that I break inside when you tear up.

I'm sorry that I love you,
that I try to make you laugh,
that I want to hold your hand,
that I only want what's best for you.

I'm sorry that my love doesn't fade.
I wasn't aware that your love had an expiration date.
when were you going to tell me that your love had turned to tolerance,
and that now its not even that?

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Manatsujeki Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I can relate, undoubtedly.
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mshottstuff101 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
oh.my.gosh. i love this. especially the ending<3
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Itachis-Little-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It's good to know that other's actually understand what i'm going through.
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InklingArt Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
I'm very glad you feel that way. :thanks:
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Itachis-Little-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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lyena Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
i love it!
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Student Writer
thank you so much! :D
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:iconlyena:
lyena Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011
No prob :D
You're the mastermind:P
keep it up^^
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Writer
thanks, girl :) will do
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Khieyn Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
Thank you so much...

...For understanding.
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010  Student Writer
:thanks:
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Khieyn Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
:)
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ObstructionofQuiet Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
This is amazing! I can totally relate T_T
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Student Writer
thank you so much :thanks:
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ObstructionofQuiet Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
You are very welcome ^^
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darkrainbowday Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Student Writer
damn! this poem hurts...... :love: and I like it!!! Write moar on this thing!!! :excited:
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InklingArt Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Student Writer
thank you :)
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meh1993 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
this is just...WOW. hard to explain the awesome. :wow:
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student Writer
aw you're so sweet! thank you! ^^
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meh1993 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
:glomp: :spidey::glomp: :spidey::glomp: :spidey::glomp: :spidey::glomp: :spidey:
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InklingArt Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Writer
hehe :D
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DanaFruit Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
This is stunning.
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student Writer
wow thank you! :)
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rovert13 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow....powerful...
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you very much
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rovert13 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ^_^"
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overclouded Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010   Photographer
oh my.
this is so wonderful, it's the thruth and it is so .. wonderful.
i am speechless. all your written things are so beautiful
you have a big big talent, i usually dont read poems and so
but i found you and youre gorgeous! :heart:
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InklingArt Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Student Writer
:blush: wow thank you so much! I'm honored that you think that highly of my poetry. :) Its an amazing feeling to hear comments like this and its very inspirational.
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xXSlowKillOverdoseXx Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Student
beautiful work indeed =)
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Student Writer
thank you very much :)
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xXSlowKillOverdoseXx Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Student
np=)
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loverz116 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
this is really good. :]
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010  Student Writer
:love: thank you
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loverz116 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010
you welcome!
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CAROTdrawsthings Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Professional General Artist
omg this is really touching :iconimsorryplz:
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:iconinklingart:
InklingArt Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010  Student Writer
Oh my gosh thank you so much :thanks:
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CAROTdrawsthings Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010  Professional General Artist
yw :huggle:
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